托福作文Topic21：人寿命长的原因

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【托福福作文185篇真题范文专项练习】
　　Topic21：谈论现在人寿命长的原因？
　　Topic21 In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

［托福参看范文之一］
Topic: 21
　　With the development of human society, people are living longer now. Many factors interacting together to enable the longer life. There are three most important causes: the quality of food has been greatly improved. people could have medical services. more and more people realize that regular sports benefit their health.
　　The improving quality of our food is the most important factor of the longer life. We could have not only enough food as we want, but also the healthier food. When we preparing food, we no longer consider the cost, but pay more attention to the nutritions of the food. With the development of transportation systems, inland people now could also enjoy seafood and tropical fruit.
　　Furthermore, governments are paying more and more money on medical establishments. Citizens could have medical services more easily. Because of the convenient medical service more illnesses could be detected at an earlier stage. Also, many illnesses that had been considered fatal could be cured today. The better detection and curement enable peoples longer life.
　　Last but not least important is that people care more for their own health. Every morning you could see people doing sports outside. More and more people have realized the saying "life is locomotion". Regular sports build up a strong body. Naturally, people with stronger body could resist more deseases.
　　To sum up, the development of our society causes the longer life of people. People have better food and better medical services. And people spend more time on sports to biuld up stronger bodies. As we could predict, people are going to live even longer.
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　　Nowadays, more and more communities for old people are founded everywhere all over the world. When you walk in a department store, you will find that more and more products for old people have been put on the shelves. The population of old people in the world is growing rapidly, and the reason is people are living longer now. There are several explanations for this phenomenon.
　　First, under the development of science and technology, it’s obviously the standards of living have been improved a lot. People work less and relax more these days than ten years ago. More entertainment has also been provided, hence people have more chances to entertain and keep a good mood everyday, which is essential for being healthy and living longer.
　　Moreover, highly developed health system is another significant factor for people to live for a long time. As the governments put more fund for health expenditure, more people are saved from the torture of illness.
　　Further more, the improvement in medicine also plays an important role. There’s an undeniable fact that after people discovered the mysteries of gene, more and more newly developed medicine cured a lot of illness that can’t be cured before. Besides all these explanations we discussed above, there are also many other reasons. But the main causes of people’s longer life is the development of science and technology, efficient health system and improvement in medicine.