托福议论文样例：发明物对人的生活的影响

文章作者 100test 发表时间 2007:03:25 21:21:01
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　　Invebtions such as eyeglasses and the sewing machine have had an important effect on our lives. Choose anotherr invention that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

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　　一 条件: 发明物对人的生活已经产生了重要影响/例如眼镜和缝纫机

　　二 要求: 除以上两种,再选择一种自己认为有重要意义的发明物,用具体理由说明其重要性.

　　三 写作分析: 本题是熟题,不愁无话可说,关键是选择的物品是否好写,例如是否掌握关键词汇.本题应当用演绎法,首先说明自己的选择,然后列出若干理由,最好将其当成辩论性文章写,力图使对方信服.

　　As modern men, we are so used to so amny inventions that we do not realize how much they have changed our lives. Eyeglasses and sewing machine are two examples. Another, and perhaps more obvious, example is television, which has so altered our way of life that we just cannot imagine what our life would be like without it.

　　Television has become our major means of entertainment. We no longer sing, dance, play musical instruments, or tell stories as we used to at home aftr supperr. We no longer turn on the radio so often. And we no longer go to cinemas and theaters unless there is something special. We can get our satisfaction at home if we just sit down and turn on the TV sets in our living rooms. We have become so addicted to our TV sets that we could feel miserable if wee were deprived of them.来源：www.examda.com

　　Television has also become our chief means of obtaining information. Without going out, we can know what the weather will be like tomorrow, what is going on at home and abroad, and whether the current prices fo stocks are going up or down. Because of television, the world has become much smaller and things and people that used to be strangers are now familiar to us. Because of television, we are thousands of times more informed than our ancestors. Now, we depend so much on television for information that we will feel stupid if we do not watch TV for only a few days.

　　Television has become part of our lives. It has become a component part of the furniture of our homes and it is our companion wherever we go. With it, we are happy and informed. when we have troubles on our minds,we turn to it. Babies grow up with it and the old watch it until their last days. In short, whether it is interestingg or boring, whether it talks sense or nonsense, our life would be empty without it.

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　　为写作方便,本文以电视机为题材,避开历史之类的内容,直接谈其对人类生活的影响.全文分四段,首段点题,其他自然围绕主题,每段用主题句开头,有例证支撑,使文章层次分明,有骨有肉.

　　第一段: 引出主题,指出电视的重要性

　　第二段: 电视已成为主要的娱乐手段

　　第三段: 电视已成为一种重要的信息来源

　　第四段: 电视已成为生活的一部分----一种概括性的结尾