这种带提纲的作文题目不仅要求考生根据标题写作,而且要根据提纲规定的内容和范围展开各个段落,不能按自己的思路发挥。考生在这方面出的问题比较多。如1994年考研作文题是:On Making Friends(论交友),其三段的提纲分别是:1.The need for friends 2.True Friendship 3.My principle in making friends。第三段的提纲要求考生围绕我交友的原则进行议论,然而有个别考生在段中这样写道:
The former paragraph has shown my principle in making friends in some way.Furthermore,what I want to say is that one good friend is enough.
When I choose friends,I do not care what work they do or what social background they are from,but I do notice those little things which reveal one s characters.I would make sure that we really care for each other,so that no matter how much time goes by without seeing each other,I know my friends will always be there,ready to help if I need them,And I know we are true friends indeed.
(二)能正确地表达思想来源:www.examda.com
一篇好短文能使读者一目了然。文章的思路应清楚,逻辑性强,能准确表达作者的思想。请对比下面两段:
Have you a bike?Taking a bike is a good way,most people think.But in university it seems not as good as other places.Bikes are possible to be stolen now and then.Having a bike isn t always good enough for us to buy one.
It is very convenient to use bikes in China.Bikes don need fuel,nor a garage or a large parking lot.Bikes can go through narrow streets and their prices are low.So bikes are the most popular vehicles in China today.