2007英语四级写作训练(七):议论型作文1

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议论型作文之11分作文

一、篇章连贯：可以通过文章内容的内在联系来表现篇章的连贯性。

1、具体到一般： 表现形式为先举例具体的事例进行分析、说明，进而得出论证或结论，在段末往往以主题句的形式表现出来。

2、一般到具体：表现为在文章段首以主题句的形式出现，然后通过具体的叙述、说明、举例使主题句变得具体、明白、易懂。

二、 常用句型

１、 开头
Its well known to us that...

Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...
Peoples view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because... However,others hold that...

2、主要论述方法
A is to B what C is to D

According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...

The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form... is representative of...

As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.

3、结尾
In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do

Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...

It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...

We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with

It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...

作业：（以下为一篇11分范文，请练习按要求改写成漂亮的14分作文）

With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option.(2) Some choose to further their studies abroad.(3) they insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . (4) First,when they live in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills.(5) Second,if they complete part or all of their education overseas,they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study.(6) Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
要求：1、句（2）（3）合成一句，句（2）改成带定语从句的主语
2、句（4）中的状语从句改称独立主谓语结构
3、句（5）中条件状语从句改称主语，句（5）变成简单句

(1)However,many people favor studying at home.(2) They argue that ,studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off and have no language and cultural barriers.
要求：1、句（1）改成" there be"句型；
2、句（2）改成两句，分别陈述两个正反论证的两个理由；

(1) I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense.(20 some students wish to have overseas academic experience.(3) If they have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision.(4) On the other hand , if conditions dont permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry.(5) What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.
要求：1、句（2）、（3）合成一句，句（2）改成句（3）中条件状语从句中主语的定语从句；

参考答案：

With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option. People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . First, living in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills. Second, completing part or all of their education overseas,help them gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand

However,there are still many people who favor studying at home.(2) They argue that , for one thing, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off . For another, there are no language and cultural barriers if they study in our country.

I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students who wish to have overseas academic experience. have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision. On the other hand , if conditions dont permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry. What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.