推荐信写作详细指导(2)
文章作者 100test 发表时间 2007:12:13 16:59:23
来源 100Test.Com百考试题网
1、客观评价自己的成就,避免赞美过度。推荐信应该表明推荐人对于申请者的动机有一定了解,并能解释申请者进一步深造的需要。很多推荐信把申请者吹成了一个甚至比教授还牛的专家,就失去了推荐信的意义,既然已经是大师级人物了,还去留学深造干嘛;
2、插入具体实例,避免堆砌泛泛的赞美之词。推荐信中对于申请者的重要素质和能力要有实例的支持。作为你的教授,总是可以论述你在帮他做的项目中的责任和表现,而作为你的老板,怎么会不能说出你的某一项具体成就呢?就像写自述信时一样,拿出一张纸,一边写出自己的品质,优点,在另一边注明至少一个实例。切记:推荐不是吹捧,所以推荐信的“装扮”要适度,不能太花哨,太渲染。要尽量用平实可信的语言,增加细节性的例证说明。
3、转换语言风格和思维角度,增加推荐可信度。自己给自己写推荐信不仅仅是摆事实的问题,还有一个口吻,行文问题。首先是内容上,除了补充自己自述中所没有的方面外,对于一些重要的成就和优点进行论述时,要从推荐人的角度考虑,切勿简单重复自述信或简历中的内容;其次是语言风格上,用词上要注意变换,不要出现你自述信中常用的习语等,最后在推荐信用的纸张、信封、字体、字号、段落等方面尽量避免雷同。
4、绝对避免语法、拼写或明显的用词错误。
下面是一篇较好的推荐信,请大家体会一下这些原则的运用。
In capacity as Professor of Mathematics at Fudan UniversityI'm writing to recommend Mr. WangGesintosyour PhD program in Computer Science. I have known Mr. Wang since his sophomore year of collegeand have acted as his thesis advisor and mentor. In my experiencehe is a gifted and diligent studentand an admirably hard worker.
Wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome the significant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. When I first met Wang in my Discrete Math classhe did not appear to be anything special to me. While his exam scores were goodthey were not as high as I would now expect of him. What I didn't know then was that due to his illnessWang was attempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one timeincluding Discrete MathematicsAdvanced MathematicsLinear Algebraand Possibilities. While most students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficultWang was overwhelmed by four of them. But in the endhe achieved an impressive score on the final examwhich made me conscious of his unusual determination he demonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
Mr. Wang and I have often talked about a variety of mathematics and computer science concepts and problems. During these discussionsI always found him to be delightfully intelligent.