托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(八)

文章作者 100test 发表时间 2008:03:29 14:17:26
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Television has destroyed communication among friends and family ,use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
For this statement， different people hold different views due to their own experience.Some people consider that the television is harmful to communicate（这里有么有用错啊） with friends and family,because sometimes the TV programs are so attractive that people even dont want anyone to talk to them（bother them 是不是更好？） , but The others hold an opposite opinion according to their owm reasons.For me,i also disagree the title statement.The following discussions will support my perspective

Now a days,television becomes more and more popular in our daily lie.Most of the time,an interesting TV program has a magic power to gather friends or family together to share their enjoyment ,happiness and excitement.One good example is the just passing Olympic Games.people,whatever known or unknown（这句话总感觉不对）,gathered together to watch games,communicate mind and share excitment. They are laughing ,tearing and thinking at the same time with the process of the game.The fantastic communication occured because of the exitence of the television. In some other places,television also strengthens the communication among friends and family. No matter how eager the people are ,a successful communication acquired at least one common topic（想说无论人们多么渴望交流，必须先有一个共同的话题，不知怎么表达才好） ,and television can provide such topics.These days,people gain news from the television more or less.therefore one can 0select some topics gained from TV programs to communicate with others. As the above given reasons,i will confirm that television has not destoryed communication among friends and family.It is a blessing rather than a curse.

修改意见:
For this statement(最好把题目改写一下)， different people hold different views due to their own experience.Some people consider that the television is harmful to communicate（这里有么有用错啊 应用communication） with friends and family,because sometimes the TV programs are so attractive that people even dont want anyone to talk to them（bother them 是不是更好？people even hate to be bothered by others） , but The others hold an opposite opinion according to their owm reasons.For me,i also disagree the title statement(最好明确表达你的观点).The following discussions will support my perspective

Now a days,television becomes more and more popular in our daily lie.Most of the time(Usually, or Ordinarily, or Generally),an interesting TV program has a magic power to gather friends or family together to share their enjoyment ,happiness and excitement.One good example is the just passing (recent hold)Olympic Games.people,whatever known or unknown（这句话总感觉不对 whomever you know or not）,gathered together to watch games,communicate(exchange) mind and share excitment. They are laughing ,tearing and thinking at the same time with the process of the game.The fantastic communication occured because of the exitence(existence) of the television. In some other places(situation),television also strengthens the communication among friends and family. No matter how eager the people are ,a successful communication acquired at least one common topic（想说无论人们多么渴望交流，必须先有一个共同的话题，不知怎么表达才好 For people who are eager to communicate with others, a common topic is always the prerequisite, which television can provide） ,and television can provide such topics（这句删掉）.These days,people gain news from the television more or less.therefore one can 0select some topics gained from TV programs to communicate with others. As the above given reasons,i will confirm that television has not destoryed communication among friends and family.It is a blessing rather than a curse.