托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(二十八)

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
On September 11th 2001, the world trade centers were attacked by the terrors. Before the buildings collapsed, New York fire fighters rushed into the “oven” where many workers were confined by the flame. unfortunately, more than three hundred fire fighters died in this attacks. When we come to this topic, we have to ask: did they enjoy risking their life to save unknown people when they hustled into the burning buildings, or could they quit because they did not like this action? The answers are “no.” It is the responsibility that drives them to sacrifice their life. Due to responsibilities including social obligation, morals and religion, people, in some situations, have to take some actions. even they do not like to do so.

To begin with, only when people obey the rules designated to benefit or protect the public, the whole society can function well and decrease chaos. in turn, people can enjoy their life. People are restricted by the regulations even though they are unwilling to do so. For example, some workers would like to sleep a little later on the morning, but they have to go to work on time because of the office regulation. otherwise, they may lose their jobs. Nobody likes to pay his bills, but, when the bills come, people rarely refuse to pay their bills, since they know the consequences.

Morals drive people to take actions even under unpleasant situations. Expect for the laws, morals are another basic factors for people to make their judgments. Two months ago, my landlord saw a drunken man lying on the street unconsciously who threw up everywhere. My landlord woke him up and kept on talking before the ambulance came. There is no rule requiring him to report and talk to silk man, but he did so because he though he should. Sometimes, religions require their believers to follow their standard to take actions. Muslim believers do not eat and drink for whole day in November, and this condition lasts for one month. It is not joyful for their body.

Therefore, in some occasions, people should do something that they are unpleased to because the regulations require them to do so, or morals and religions prompt their actions. Such responsibilities ensure that people can do what they enjoy.

修改意见：
it is well done, but i think the topics, such as religion or moral, are too difficult to write. i conclude two reasons as follows.

1. family responsibility, have to earn money to suppot his family, why so many people complain the heavy workload whout quitting their jobs.

2. social responsibility, just as your essay.