托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(六十)

文章作者 100test 发表时间 2008:04:03 11:55:25
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123. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

In our daily life, people read various books, which can provide them with precious knowledge and great amusement. When facing the question that which kind of book should be read, people hold diverse opinions. Some people think that they should only read books related with real events and real people, however, others do not agree with it. In my point of view, I think that people should read various kinds of books, not only the books about real activities. My preference will be substantiated in the following discussion.

The essential factor that deserves our consideration is that the science fiction can give people more imagination to explore the future world that is unknown for human. In the process of humans development, it is always a correct method by which people can reach the final reasonable conclusion. For example, scientists imagined how the Moon is running around the Earth, which gives them the inspiration to explore the outer space and other stars. Now, satellites in the out space make it possible to forecast weather and give people help in every activity.

Another point with the equal significance is that children can absorb all kind of knowledge that is vital for their growing. In the process when children learn about the new world, they cannot understand some events and cannot imagine what happened around them. What their parents can do is to tell them the story which is fictive. Sometimes, children read the cartoon books about an imaginary world. These educational boos can teach kids to know about the outside world by their favorable ways.

In addition, some romantic story can bring people amusement and fun. In the real life, lots of people enjoy reading books about romantic story, in that they think these books can give them chances to escape from boring puzzles in the work or family.

Admittedly, the advantages of books about real events and established facts can not be denied. They can teach people the invaluable knowledge and useful experience which have been verified by the history. However, if people read books in only one kind, they will enlace their imagination and block their way to comprehensive progresses to some extent.
All the factors mentioned above weave into an organic whole and thus become more convincible. The merits of reading both fiction books and other content books can definitely contribute to the further development and also lead to my original propensity.

修改意见:
In our daily life, people read various books, which can provide them with precious knowledge and great amusement. When facing the question that which kind of book should be read, people hold diverse opinions. Some people think that they should only read books related with real events and real people, however, others do not agree with it. In my point of view, I think that people should read various kinds of books, not only the books about real activities. My preference will be substantiated in the following discussion.

The essential factor that deserves our consideration is that the science fiction （最好用various kinds先总说，再举例引出science fiction做specific details）can give people more imagination to explore the future world that is unknown for human（罗嗦，改成the unknown future world）. In the process of human\s development, it is always a correct method by which people can reach the final reasonable conclusion. For example, scientists imagined how the Moon is running around the Earth, which gives them the inspiration to explore the outer space and other stars.（看不出没什么逻辑关系吧） Now, satellites in the out space make it possible to forecast weather and give people help in every activity.

这一段论证不能很好支持论点。

Another point with the equal significance is that children can absorb all kind of knowledge that is vital for their growing. In the process when（改成of） children learn about the new world, they cannot understand some events（觉得something比较好，events具体指某些事件了）and cannot imagine what happened around them. What their parents can do is to tell them the story which is fictive. Sometimes, children read the cartoon books about an imaginary world. These educational books can teach kids to know about the outside world by their favorable ways.

In addition, some romantic story（stories）can bring people amusement and fun. In the real life, lots of people enjoy reading books about romantic story（stories）, in that they think these books can give them chances to escape from boring puzzles in the work or family.

Admittedly, the advantages of books about real events and established facts can not be denied. They can teach people the invaluable knowledge and useful experience which have been verified by the history. However, if people read books in only one kind, （of one kind）they will enlace their imagination and block their way to comprehensive progresses to some extent.

All the factors mentioned above weave into an organic whole and thus become more convincible. The merits of reading both fiction books and other content books can definitely contribute to the further development and also lead to my original propensity.

行文流畅，基本没什么语法错误。就是第二段要想想。我想这样的文章拿个5＋分不成问题。