2009年6月英语四级考前热点高分范文(五)CET6考试

文章作者 100test 发表时间 2009:05:14 20:53:16
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  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1)根据调查,目前在全国的大城市中有大约80%的中学生都有私人家教 我要高分
  2)分析中学生请家教的利弊
  3)你的看法
  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?  
  _______________________________________________________________________________
  _______________________________________________________________________________
  _______________________________________________________________________________
  行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述中学生请家教的现状.分析中学生请家教的利弊.谈谈“我”对中学生请家教现象的看法。
  高分范文
  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
  A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are [1]attaching greater importance to education. [2]However, private tutoring [3]has both advantages and disadvantages.
  Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. [2]In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know [4]the weak points as well as [4]the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, [5]in most cases, directly to the point. [2]On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
  [2]For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. [2]For another, some tutors, [5]busy “shuttling” from one family to another, [6]tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
  [7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think [3]the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
  In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid [8]on classroom teaching and practice, [8]on the improvement of teaching quality [8]and on the tapping of the pupil’s potential. [9]Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
  【亮点点评】
  [1]“非常关注”。
  [2]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [3]“有利有弊”。“弊大于利”。
  [4]“弱点”。“优点”。
  [5]插入语。
  [6]“倾向于,往往”。
  [7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词,意为“考虑到,鉴于”。
  [8]and连接的平行结构。
  [9]“only 状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。
  佳句临摩
  1.佳句:Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.
  临摩:无论多么困难的一项任务,只要有决心都能够完成。
  ___________________________________________________________________________.
  2.佳句:It takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can har
  hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.
  临摩:社会上有如此多的诱惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能误入歧途。
  ___________________________________________________________________________.
  3.佳句:Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.
  临摩: 传统食物的烹饪往往很耗时,而且需要花费很多时间和精力去学习。
  ___________________________________________________________________________.
  【KEY】
  1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.
  2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.
  3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.
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