英语六级模拟试卷(29)--改错

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Part Ⅳ
Error Correction (15 minutes)

We are all naturally attracted to people with ideas,
beliefs and interests like our own. Similarly, we
feel comfortable with people with physical qualities
similar as ours.--71--

You may have noticed about how people who live or work --72--
closely together come to behave in a similar way.
Unconsciously we copy these we are close to or love --73--
or admire. So a sportsman’s individual way of walking
with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. --74--
a pair or lovers both shake their heads in the same
way. an employer finds himself duplicating his boss’s --75--
habit of wagging (摆动) a pen between his fingers while thinking.

In every case, the influential person may consciously --76--
notice the imitation but he will feel comfortably in --77--
its presence. And if he does notice the matching of
his gestures or movements, he finds it pleasing he
is influencing people: they are drawn to them.--78--

Sensitive people have been mirroring their friend and --79--
acquaintances all their lives., and winning affection
and respect in this way without aware of their methods. --80--
Now, for people who want to win agreement or trust,
affection or sympathy, some psychologists recommend
the deliberate use of physical imitation.

答案：
71.as改为to。Similar（相似的）与介词to连用，表示“与…相似”。
72.去掉about。 notice为及物动词，后面直接接宾语。
73.these改为those。当特指“那些人”时，只能用those, 后面接定语从句。
74.admired改为admiring。 根据句子的意思，是fan去admire运动员（sportsman），因而admire用现在分词形式。
75.employer改为employee。 根据句子的意思，模仿老板的行为的那个人，应该是employee (雇员)。
76.consciously改为unconsciously。根据句子的意思，有影响力的人并非刻意去注意他们对自己的模仿，应该是unconsciously（无意识地）。
77.comfortably改为comfortable。 根据句子的意思，feel后面应该接形容词(comfortable)做表语。
78.them改为him。根据句子的意思，he在影响他人，因此，他人在向他（him）靠拢。
79.friend改为friends。与friend并列的是acquaintances (熟人)，而acquaintances 用的是复数，friend也用复数。
80.在aware之前加上being. Aware是形容词，不能直接做介词without的宾语，加上 being动名词，与aware一起做介词without的宾语。