托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(十六)

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Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Nowadays, there is a debate over whether college students should be required to attend class or not. Some people claim that students have obligation to attend classes, while others believed that students have rights to choose. As a matter of fact, this issue is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds. In my opinion, whether one choice takes precedence over another depends on the specific situation. Actually, the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis, but in general, I have the tendency to agree that university students should be required to attend classes.

First of all, people attend university since they want to learn something to improve themselves, which classes can provide. On the other hand, although people could learn knowledge by self-studying, in the class, Professor will not only teach people some knowledge, but also let them know how to use and develop it. Honestly to say, it is difficult for people to understand this process merely through self-studying.

Secondly, joining classes can provide the opportunity to communicate with others. In the class, professors always give some topics for students to discuss. In the discussion, people will be surprised that so many fresh thoughts are pushing to you from your classmates and they are free. Unfortunately, people will miss the opportunity to learn from the others if they absent the class.

Admittedly, there are several disadvantages to attend classes. Some people such as John·Nash criticize that classes would destroy their original thinking ability. Besides, some classes are really boring for students.

In conclusion, despite the fact that there are some disadvantages in attending classes, the advantages of joining classes are far more outweigh. As the reasons mentioned above, we could suggest that attend classes, unless you are a genius.

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Admittedly, there are several disadvantages to attend attending classes. Some people such as John·Nash criticize 时态？that classes would destroy their original thinking ability. Besides, some classes are really boring for students.

In conclusion, despite the fact that there are some disadvantages in attending classes, the advantages of joining classes are far more outweigh ？. As the reasons mentioned above, we could suggest that attend classes, unless you are a genius.

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